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Insomnius Master Of The Craft

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Posted: Monday, 18 June 2012, 3:47 AM Post subject: Sippy Cups |
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Being with most of kids and all of my grandchildren got me reminiscing...
Was it yesterday
or last year?
Those plastic things
with rubber rings
were everywhere?
Toddler toes,
laughter, and screams.
These were my life
stepping on cups
as I chased little ones.
The sippy cup
in the dishwasher
on the floor
in the fridge
or in chubby little hands.
They were everywhere
floor to ceiling
thrown on my chair
giving me 'surprise!'
when I sat down.
Thrown on the floor
when Daddy would growl;
a delighted scream
escaping as little legs
started pumping away.
There was a point
I don't now remember
when sippy cups went away
replaced by cans
of fizzy sugar water.
Soccer, football,
basketball games.
Driving lessons
the prom, and eventually
the leaving.
I can't remember where the
sippy cups went
Some box probably.
Nor do I recall
what the favorites were.
And now, it seems like
it happened so fast
here are my toddlers
all grown, buying,
sippy cups.
_________________ "I Shall Look At The World Through Tears. Perhaps I Shall See Things That, Dry-Eyed, I Could Not See".---Nicholas Wolterstorff.
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Janice J Kennedy Guest
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Posted: Monday, 18 June 2012, 5:22 AM Post subject: |
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Mark, can I ever relate to this.
With a 5 year old grandson, it hasn't been that long ago for me.
At my daughter house you had to watch out for her dogs. Seems
like they like sippy cups, too.
You did a really good job of this one. I enjoyed reading this gem!
keep'em coming!
~ Jan
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Cyrille Godlike Guru

Joined: 22 Nov 2005 Posts: 2595 Location: Westwego LA
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Currently Reading: American Archery by Robert P Elmer; How the Post Office Created America by Winifred Gallagher
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Posted: Monday, 18 June 2012, 5:38 AM Post subject: |
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I too enjoyed this Mark. My grandson just "retired" his sippy cup(s) ay six yeras of age. Your poem does a good job in describing the "prolifaration of those drinking vessels from h--- 
_________________ Cyrille "A poet when he writes is like a lover in his lady's arms. All seems true, you understand---that's half the joy of writing"
(from the Play "Cyrano De Bergerac," by Edmumd Rostand"
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Insomnius Master Of The Craft

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Posted: Monday, 18 June 2012, 5:53 AM Post subject: |
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Thanks Jan and Robert.... was hoping all of us 'Grand' peeps would relate. 
_________________ "I Shall Look At The World Through Tears. Perhaps I Shall See Things That, Dry-Eyed, I Could Not See".---Nicholas Wolterstorff.
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Maggie Moderator

Joined: 10 Aug 2005 Posts: 6449 Location: Eastern USA
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Currently Reading: "Snippets of Life" by Peggy Harwood
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Posted: Monday, 18 June 2012, 6:07 AM Post subject: |
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Nostalgic, Mark,
I like it too! Cute!!!
Peggy 
_________________ "Then he thinks he knows/ The hills where his life rose/ And the sea where it goes." from the "Buried Life" by Matthew Arnold
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madison123ivy Glorious Newborn
Joined: 03 May 2017 Posts: 1 Location: California,United States 
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Posted: Wednesday, 03 May 2017, 3:24 AM Post subject: |
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It's so cute and heart touching. Love your poem. I appreciate your hard work for making the poem.
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